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Freedom from Pain

A WriteUp by Jyo Nov 29, 2009
The soft whisper of
the wind on her sleeping face,
caressing her pale cheeks
and playing softly with her hair.
The soft rays of the
sun sneeking in through
the blinds
laying soft kisses
on her forehead.
Her face deviod of pain,
a gentle cough
and intake of breath.
Sickness has left her
frail body
for this short moment
as she rests.
The wind softly
bends around her body
as the sunlight
kisses her cheeks,
bringing a small
amount of color
to her pale face.
She inhales softly
and her eyelids flutter
as she exhales.
Her eyes open for a moment
and she coughs gently,
trying not to
attract her mother's
attention.
She lies back down
and takes one last breath
as her life gently steps
out of her sick and broken body
and joins the wind and sun
in a dance of joy and freedom,
leaving her frail body behind.
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1 Responses to Freedom from Pain

  1. awesome.

     
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